Silence of the Lambs week continues!
not only deleted scenes, but every line
deleted from the remaining scenes, which is highly instructive when it comes to trimming
screenplays down and keeping things moving.
The editor is constantly snipping off the ending lines that would have provided
a little “button” for each scene…But of course life is a lot more unpredictable
and dangerous when things get unbuttoned.
movie is exactly two hours, which was obviously the producer-mandated
length. If Demme hadn’t gone through and
ruthlessly cut out every slack line and scene, it would have been 2:20, the
standard length for today’s flabby, lifeless blockbusters—strong evidence that
the tyranny of the “director’s cut” has ruined Hollywood’s ability to tell stories.
instructive are the two cut scenes that were obviously intended to provide a
“launch into act three”. After Lecter
escapes, the angry director of the FBI (played by Demme’s old mentor, Roger
Corman) calls our heroes into his office where he summarily fires Crawford and kicks
Clarice out of the Academy. As they
leave, Clarice says to Crawford that she’s now sure that the killer must be in
Ohio, and she’s going to go there and find him, save the day, and get
them their jobs back.
take the advice of his fans: he chopped them out and never looked back.
Yes, it was
vitally important to shift into proactivity and create a finale in which
Clarice was the only one who could solve the problem, but she shouldn’t have to
announce it! The audience should feel the structure, not see it.
done your job right, the audience will get frustrated and think to themselves, “Dammit, the Feds are totally screwing this
up! It’s all up to Clarice now!” But if
you actually force Clarice to say out
loud: “My bosses are screwing this up!
It’s all up to me now!”, then that’s an admission of defeat on your part.
Tomorrow: How to empower a less-than-cocky rookie.