The Expanded Ultimate Story Checklist: Does the scene cut out early on a question?

I already mentioned the possibility of chopping out the first two lines of scenes and chopping out some of the middle as well. While you’re at it, why not chop out the last two lines of every scene? These lines wrap up the events and set the stage for the next progression, but you don’t want that either. Instead, just yank the audience out of this scene and into the next at the earliest possible moment. 

Whenever you can, end on a question and have the circumstances of the next scene instantly answer that question. Don’t have the characters discuss what they’re going to do next; just have one ask, “What can we do now?” and cut to a shot that answers the question. “You’re losing in the polls. What do you intend to do about it?” Cut to the candidate knocking on doors in a sketchy neighborhood.

This is a great way to trim unnecessary dialogue. You don’t need to show the hero answer the question and then consider his next move. Just let the transition answer the question. The same trick works for crosscutting between different characters. “What else could go wrong?” Cut to the villain’s office.

Perhaps the question at the end of the scene is answered by the circumstances of the next scene. Perhaps it goes unanswered for now and becomes a mysterious undercurrent. Either way, we are propelled out of the scene before we have a chance to “put a button” on what’s happened.

Every scene should have its own beginning, middle, and end, but that ending should usually be a cliff-hanger. You don’t want to waste valuable time watching your characters pause to process what’s happened, much less what it might mean, because your story will suddenly go slack.

For this Scenework series, we’re examining these scenes:

The 40 Year Old Virgin	Andy goes home with a drunk woman from a Bachelorette party.
Alien	After the deaths of Kane, Brett and Dallas, Ripley becomes captain, so she has a meeting with the other survivors, Ash, Parker, and Lambert, to decide what to do next.
An Education	Jenny is amazed as David gets permission from her parents to take her on a weekend trip to Oxford by claiming to know C.S. Lewis.
The Babadook	Amelia chases her son Sam down to the basement, where he knocks her out, ties her up, and drives the Babadook out of her, temporarily.
Blazing Saddles	Bart arrives in town, then takes himself hostage to save himself from hostile townspeople
Blue Velvet	Jeffrey spies on Dorothy and Frank, then Dorothy catches Jeffrey in her apartment and has sex with him at knifepoint.
The Bourne Identity	Jason and Marie are attacked at her family’s farm by the assassin known as The Professor. Jason blows up a propane tank to distract him and kills him, but as the Professor dies he convinces Jason to come back.
Bridesmaids	Annie is driving angry after feuding with Helen when she gets pulled over by a cute cop, who gives her his number under the pretense of recommending a place to get her tail light fixed.
Casablanca	Sketchy crook Ugarte asks cool club owner Rick to hold onto the letters of transit for him.
Chinatown	Jake confronts Noah Cross with the glasses
Donnie Brasco	Lefty seeks to go behind Sonny Black’s back to set up his own meeting in Florida with Trifficante. He has Donnie borrow a boat for this purpose, but Sonny Black knows everything, and he crashes the party.  Lefty bitterly assumes that Donnie has betrayed him, and shuns him.  Sonny takes Donnie aside and elevates him above Lefty.
Do the Right Thing	Buggin’ Out notices that there are no brothers on the wall of Sal’s Pizzeria and decides to organize a boycott.
The Farewell	Billi finds out about Nai Nai’s diagnosis from her parents.
The Fighter	Micky and Charlene confront Micky’s family about his career.
Frozen	Anna confront Elsa in her ice palace
The Fugitive	Gerard confronts Kimble atop a dam, but Kimble leaps off.
Get Out	Chris sneaks out for a smoke in the night, has creepy encounters with Georgina and Walter, then finds Missy drinking tea.  She implores him to sit down, he repeats that he doesn’t want to be hypnotized, but she does it anyway with her teacup.  She gets him to admit the facts of his mother’s death, then sends him to a “sunken place” in his mind.
Groundhog Day	Phil takes Rita to a cafe and tries to convince her that he’s living the same day over and over. He convinces her by predicting what Larry will say.
How to Train Your Dragon	Hiccup and his students are in an arena competing to defeat a dragon, but Hiccup is quizzing their instructor to find out how to better commune with his own dragon, Toothless. Along the way, he uses what he learned from Toothless to peacefully subdue the dragon they’re fighting, infuriating the others.
In a Lonely Place	Laurel has made secret plans to leave town, but Dix makes her go to his favorite restaurant to celebrate their engagement with his agent, his alcoholic friend, and others.
Iron Man	Tony has built a better chest-device to keep shrapnel out of his heart, so he calls Pepper in to reach into his chest and replace the old one with a new one.
Lady Bird	Lady Bird flirts with Kyle in the parking lot.
Raising Arizona	During Hi and Ed’s first night with Junior, brothers Gale and Evelle show up having just escaped from jail, and begin to suspect the truth.
Rushmore	Max introduces himself to Ms. Cross on the bleachers.
Selma	King meets with Johnson in the Oval Office to try to get him to commit to a new Voting Rights Act
The Shining	Jack finally takes a drink from the ghosts in the ballroom. A waiter spills a drink on him, and takes him to the bathroom to clean it off.  While he does so, Jack realizes that the waiter is actually Grady, the former caretaker that killed his family.  Grady encourages him to do the same, but Jack is uncertain.
Sideways	Miles has struck out with Maya, but Jack comes back to the motel after a wild night with Steph, intending to go back out. Miles tries to get Jack to stay by forcing him to call his fiancé, but she doesn’t answer and Jack takes off with Steph after getting Miles to return his unused condom from the night before.
The Silence of the Lambs	Clarice first meets Lecter in his cell, under the pretense of getting him to fill out a questionnaire, but he quickly figures out that it’s really about Buffalo Bill, and that Clarice is hiding other things as well.
Star Wars	The gang takes over the Death Star command office.
Sunset Boulevard	Joe discovers Norma, who assumes that he’s there to plan her monkey’s funeral, but when he explains that he’s a screenwriter, she hires him to rewrite her screenplay for Salome instead.

So how do those scenes answer this question?

The 40 Year Old Virgin	NO. It cuts out early, but on an answer, not a question.
Alien	YES. Slightly early, on her line “I’ve got access to mother now and I’ll get my own answers, thank you.”
An Education	YES. “It wouldn’t be a bother, would it, David?”
The Babadook	NO. it goes to the end.
Blazing Saddles	NO. He actually turns to the camera and gives us a summary of the scene.
Blue Velvet	NO. it goes to the end.
The Bourne Identity	YES. It cuts out on the professor’s line, “Look what they make you give.”  This sets up Jason’s decision to split with Marie for now.
Bridesmaids	NO, plays out awkwardly to the end, moves on to scene of emotional fallout, as she arrives home and looks at evidence of her bakery.
Casablanca	NO. it goes until they both leave.
Chinatown	YES. Implied: How will Gittes get out of this.
Donnie Brasco	YES.
Do the Right Thing	NO. it goes to the end.
The Farewell	YES. Ends on: ”If you go now, she will find out right away.”  Is that true?
The Fighter	YES. Dicky says he’ll get the money, Micky responds, “You? How?”
Frozen	NO. it ends with them being thrown out.
The Fugitive	YES. Can we go home now?  (It’s answered immediately with “No.” but we don’t know why not yet.)
Get Out	YES. Will he ever get out of the sunken place (Then, when we cut to him waking up, we wonder if the whole thing might have been a nightmare, which helps explain why he doesn’t immediately get out of the house.)
Groundhog Day	YES. Will she go with him? We don’t find out until the cut.
How to Train Your Dragon	YES. Cuts away on a question, not an answer.
In a Lonely Place	YES. where is he going?
Iron Man	No. The transition to the next scene is actually really abrupt and awkward.
Lady Bird	YES. We cut out early before they part ways, but not on a question.
Raising Arizona	YES. “Got you on a pretty short leash, doesn’t she, Hi?”
Rushmore	NO.
Selma	YES. It ends a little early on King saying “Yes, Mr. President, I understand,” The implied question is “Does he really?” Then it cuts to King saying “Selma it is”, answering that question.
The Shining	YES. “When my wife tried to keep me from doing my duty, I ‘corrected’ her.” Then cut to a shot of Wendy.
Sideways	NO. it goes to the end.
The Silence of the Lambs	YES. Implied: it cuts out early on a cryptic comment.
Star Wars	YES. “What should Artoo and I do if we’re discovered here?” The only answer they get is sarcastic.
Sunset Boulevard	YES. We have a dread that Joe’s scheme to extract money out of Norma will probably fail as much as his other schemes, but with worse consequences. (Partially because we’ve already seen him dead in her pool!)