At the end of the video you mention how this series is about getting people to fall in love with your character in the first 15 minutes/5 pages, very briefly, but I can't help feel that this should be in the introduction to all the videos. Your premise for this book is so good, that having a great story is no good if people don't give it a shot, and these things are all about getting your reader hooked (while the last book was about giving them something worthwhile when they arrive).
For these kind of "List videos", I prefer if there is text for each element of the list. I also think that it would be a good idea to say how long the list is going to be at the beginning.
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At the end of the video you mention how this series is about getting people to fall in love with your character in the first 15 minutes/5 pages, very briefly, but I can't help feel that this should be in the introduction to all the videos. Your premise for this book is so good, that having a great story is no good if people don't give it a shot, and these things are all about getting your reader hooked (while the last book was about giving them something worthwhile when they arrive).
For these kind of "List videos", I prefer if there is text for each element of the list.
I also think that it would be a good idea to say how long the list is going to be at the beginning.
Thanks!
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