At the end of the video you mention how this series is about getting people to fall in love with your character in the first 15 minutes/5 pages, very briefly, but I can't help feel that this should be in the introduction to all the videos. Your premise for this book is so good, that having a great story is no good if people don't give it a shot, and these things are all about getting your reader hooked (while the last book was about giving them something worthwhile when they arrive).
For these kind of "List videos", I prefer if there is text for each element of the list. I also think that it would be a good idea to say how long the list is going to be at the beginning.
At the end of the video you mention how this series is about getting people to fall in love with your character in the first 15 minutes/5 pages, very briefly, but I can't help feel that this should be in the introduction to all the videos. Your premise for this book is so good, that having a great story is no good if people don't give it a shot, and these things are all about getting your reader hooked (while the last book was about giving them something worthwhile when they arrive).
ReplyDeleteFor these kind of "List videos", I prefer if there is text for each element of the list.
ReplyDeleteI also think that it would be a good idea to say how long the list is going to be at the beginning.
Thanks!
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